- The original phrase 'Responsive HTML template' is rephrased to 'sleek and versatile HTML template' to provide a more detailed description and emphasis on the template's usability. - The terms 'hair salons' and 'beauty salons' are grouped together as 'salons' and more broadly described as 'local hair or beauty business' to improve the clarity and specificity of the statement. - The phrase 'other similar local business' is omitted as it's considered somewhat redundant and may dilute the focus of the original statement. - The term 'establishments' is...